Saturday, November 21, 2009

His smile :)

So today in class we had to write a paragraph about one trait about a certain person. I wrote bout Marcus.

In this assignment, you will write a single descriptive paragraph about someone you know. The final paragraph should be 250–300 words long and should thoroughly describe a single trait, characteristic, or quality of that person. Remember to build on the basic anatomy of a paragraph: point, evidence/illustration, explanation.

When he smiles, I feel safe. His eyes squints but I can still see a spark in his eyes. The shape of his lips and the shining of his teeth, form a beautiful masterpiece. A masterpiece, that couldn’t be sculpted by Michelangelo. A masterpiece not created on a canvas. No matter how I’m feeling, everything is perfect. No worries, no regret, I’m carefree. When he smiles, I’m reminded that there is still some good in this world. I see purity, and I see innocence. When he smiles, my heart is smiling. The times that I’m mad or sad, his smile I could never deny. It takes me to a higher place; it lifts me from this horror. I could never understand love, if it wasn’t for his smile. It’s electrifying, it beams right through me. I can see his soul, shining so bright. It brightens my world up, even in the darkest parts. I’m speechless even left breathless at times. His smile pulls in not only me but many others. I see it, in the way one looks at him. They notice if even for a small second, the beauty in his smile. How could one have such a beautiful gift? I no longer have to question if there is a god. I know now there is because his smile is god sent. Only an angle could have such a magnetizing effect with a smile. Life as I know it wouldn’t be the same if it wasn’t for his smile. 

1 comment:

  1. I really like that. This inspired me to write again.

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